addicted to wires cover

I have this crazy idea for a manga in my head hopefully it comes out all right I already have a couple of pages hand drawn now I just gotta color it this is my cover for my comic its called addicted to wires with the main Character Rebecca I hope it came out alright let me know what you think

addicted to wires is about Rebecca and her addiction to games and such when her computer breaks she goes to a friend to get it fixed when that friend suggest she tries his new experimental program something goes wrong and that should be shown in a couple of pages lol

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